Wednesday, June 4, 2025

Jumping into Hell

 

Lots of firing - C47's still coming - men jumping into hell.
Medic's Field Notes, Airborne Museum, Saint Mer Eglise Normandy

In April of 2024 I visited the beaches and areas of Normandy made infamous on June 6, 1944. Our tour guide, Valentine, inspired this screenplay that I submitted for a competition (got great feedback, but did not advance). He told us of a French professional cyclist who had been able to "train" in Normandy but was actually doing work with and for the French Resistance. 

There are so many unknown stories and heroes form France that helped the Allies as they prepared for the D Day invasion. Also, the BBC would transmit codes within their broadcasts to those who dared have a hidden transistor radio. 

*The formatting is off, but please take a moment to read. It felt nice to be back in script mode. 


JUMPING INTO HELL

Members of the French Resistance, led by a professional cyclist, gather intel to free their town and country from the German occupation. A story of lovers, unexpected spies, and a wager with freedom.

 

EXT. DIRT ROAD – LONGUES SUR MER - NORMANDY FRANCE JUNE 1944 - DAY

 

Foggy day with rain imminent. The wind picking up in intensity.

 

SUPER: “June 5, 1944 – Normandy”

 

VALENTINE (26) a professional cyclist is training along the ocean near three large German batteries with their guns being positioned in opposite directions. He was given special permissions to train in the countryside. He owns a bicycle shop in Bayeux.

 

He stops, dismounts, and looks at his back tire. He sighs emphatically and looks up and around his surroundings. Around the bunkers are numerous German soldiers appearing to ready their equipment. GERMAN SOLIDER ONE (30) confronts Valentine.

 

                                                            GERMAN SOLDIER ONE

                                    Foolish to be out here with this weather. Papers.


Valentine reaches into this shirt pocket for his papers and hands them to the soldier.

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    I have an issue with my tire. I will be going

as soon as just fix the derailleur. Won’t be long.

The soldier looks at the papers and emphatically gives them back to Valentine.

                                                            GERMAN SOLDIER ONE

                                    No more than one minute. And this area is

off limits starting in two minutes.

 

As Valentine takes his papers, three German military vehicles filled with soldiers speed by to one of the furthest batteries.

 

                                                            GERMAN SOLDIER ONE

                                    Thirty seconds.

 

Valentine quickly puts his papers away and then assess the gear on his bike, He quickly mounts and rides away, not looking back.

 

EXT. DIRT ROAD OUTSIDE OF BAYEUX – MIDDAY

The rain is now coming down sideways and Valentine is trying to ride his bike but the roads are beginning to get too muddy. He keeps trying to pedal, even going into the grass to get away from the mud. He is run off the road by a German truck filled with soldiers. He pedals for a few more meters, stops, gets off his bike, and begins to run with his bike to a nearby house.

As he stands under the eaves, breathing heavily, the door opens suddenly causing Valentine to jump.

JEAN (23), who is blind, is at the door.

 

                                                            JEAN

                                    Valentine, why are you breathing heavily

at my door in the pouring rain? Get in.

 Get in, I have news for you.

Valentine enters the house, which doubles as a music teaching studio. He wipes his feet and stays near the door. As he does this, Jean makes his way to the small kitchen.

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    I don’t want to get mud all over your floor.

                                    I’ll just stay here.

 

Jean feels his way to a burner and pours some warm calvados into a mug for Valentine. He also picks up a towel for his friend.

                                                            JEAN

                                    Graciously appreciated. It’s really raining

so hard. Let me get you some warm calvados.

We can’t have you catching death now especially

(pause) with the longing sobs of the violins, you’ll

hurt my heart with monotonous languor.

Valentine perks up.

                                                            VALETINE

                                    Officially? Right, lots of troops. They were,

they were moving the guns in the batteries.

But the weather today?

Valentine meets Jean part way and takes the towel and drink. He sips carefully before drying his face and hair.

                                                            JEAN

                                    Yes, there have been a lot of trucks today.

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    Thank you for this, by the way.

(lifts cup in thanks)

You know, Miriam and I have room.

 

                        JEAN

It won’t be necessary, but thank you.

 

More trucks speed by outside Jean’s house, causing them to pause. Valentine lowers his voice to a whisper.

 

                        VALENTINE

                                    You’ll be safer with us. At least we

                                    have the wine cellar. You have what?

                                    A French horn and a bassoon to protect

                                    yourself?

 

                                                            JEAN

                                                (laughs quietly)

                                    That won’t be necessary. As soon as the

                                    Allies arrives, our friends will leave us alone,

                                    and quickly.

 

Valentine makes a questioning face.

                                                            JEAN (CONT’D)

                                    I truly wish I could visualize your face.

                                    I’m sure its quite amusing. I’ll bet you,

                                    three of my finest Calvados Pays d'Auge,

                                    let’s say 1940.

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    You really think we’re safe here? Those

                                    Allies are going to be jumping into hell.

                                    I’ve seen the batteries, the guns, the

                                    amount of troops.

 

                                                            JEAN

                                    I hear things. People think I’m deaf not

                                    blind. Hell will not be here. Close, but not here.

Three of my Calvados or, I don’t know,

                                    maybe two of your Château Mouton

Rothschild. 1940, of course. 1939 was off.

 

Valentine gulps down the remainder of the calvados.

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    I personally think you’re mad, not blind.

                                                (beat)

                                    Deal. Thank you again, Jean.

 

Valentine exits. Jean sighs.

 

MONTAGE:

-          Valentine in the torrential rain trying to ride his bicycle.

-          Valentine getting stopped by the Gestapo and handing over his papers.

-          Gestapo pointing in the opposite direction for Valentine to take.

-          Valentine trying to go around a blockage of barbed wire to find a bridge has been destroyed.

-          Valentine talking to FATHER MICHEL (45) at his church.

-          Valentine exiting a market with bread.

-          Valentine arriving at his bicycle shop.

 

INT. WINE CELLAR – BAYEYX – NORMANDY FRNACE 1944 – EVENING

MIRIAM (24) is Valentine’s co-resistance member and his pregnant wife. She is moving bottles of wine to the side exposing a cabinet. She hears the cellar door open and stops. She sees it is Valentine and continues moving the bottles.

Valentine has brought some dry clothes into the cellar with him He kisses Miriam before starting to change.  As they talk Miriam continues to move bottles away from the cabinet.

                                                            MIRIAM

                                    I was getting worried.

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    You were getting hungry.

 

                                                            MIRIAM

                                    That too. I heard the invasion is imminent.

                                    But seeing that you’re soaked I’m guessing

                                    it will be tomorrow.

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    I stopped by to see the Doves. They’ve been

                                    flooded with messages today. I made it to

Longues sur Mer this morning. They are moving

the batteries into place at, Jean is convinced the

Germans are leaving town when the invasion starts,

I think he’s mad, the bridge has been taken out at

the Loup, oh I saw Father Michel...

 

Miriam opens the cabinet doors as Valentine finishes changing. In the cabinet is a Phillips radio. It is programmed to pick up the BBC. When the doors open, it completes the loop to power it.

 

                                                            MIRIAM

                                    The news.

They both get close to the radio as it is turned down low.

 

                                                            BBC RADIO – MALE VOICE

                                    This is London calling in the European news

                                    service of the British Broadcasting Corporation.

                                    Here is the news. But first here is some news for

                                    our friends in occupied countries. The virgin war

                                    will not be held. John is growing a very long

                                    beard this week. The long sobs of the violins

                                    of autumn fill my heart with monotonous languor.

                                    It is hot in Suez. The dice are on the table.

 

Miriam and Valentine both look at each other.

                                                            MIRIAM

                                    Be safe.

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    You get to the tower if you don’t feel safe.

                                    Promise me? The ladies have a deep cellar

                                    there…while the world comes to save us

by dropping loads of bombs on the Germans.

Oh, I told Jean he should come here. He knows

the signal.

 

They hug each other quickly and then kiss. Valentine kisses his fingers and places them on Miriam’s pregnant belly.                

                                               

EXT. ALLEYS OF BAYEUX – EVENING

The rain has stopped. Valentine walks quickly through the streets that are not fully empty as it is not curfew. He passes by the German recruitment office across the street from a hat store. He crosses the street and tries the door of the shop. The sign reads closed. He rings the bell.  GERMAN SOLDIER TWO (35) is exiting the recruitment office.

                                                            GERMAN SOLDER TWO

                                    Can you not read? It is closed? Go home.

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    I am not here for a hat. The owner is my wife’s

                                    midwife. My wife is having, she is having

complications and I want her to be seen before

curfew.


An OLDER WOMAN (50) answers the door. The soldier waits.

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    Hi! Sorry to trouble you so late.  You see

                                    Miriam is having some complications.

                                    I knew coming here was a roll of the dice,

                                    but it would wound my heart if anything

                                    happens to our child.

 

                                                            OLDER WOMAN

                                    Oh no bother. Come in while I get my bag.

 

Valentine enters the shop. The soldier begins to walk away. He stops and turns as the door is closed. He pauses and then continues walking.

 

INT. HAT SHOP – EVENING

The older woman peers out of the window blinds.

 

                                                            OLDER WOMAN

                                    He’s been a pain all day.

                                                            (beat)

                                    It’s really happening?

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    Lots of troops and they are readying the

                                    batteries. I encountered so many roadblocks

                                    today and my papers were no good. But, little

                                    did they know, I love being told to go another

                                    way around.

 

                                                            OLDER WOMAN

                                    Surprising they actually made it out of Poland.

                                    I’ll take sector 15. You reported the battery

                                    placement to the Tower?

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    Took me half a day, but yes. And I’ll take 23.

 

The older woman puts on her coat and grabs her bag.

 

                                                            OLDER WOMAN

                                    Let’s leave together, we can walk past your shop,

                                    just in case.

                                   

EXT. ALLEY WAY – NIGHT

Valentine and the older woman walk quickly down the block. When they get to the bicycle shop, they split up.

INT. BAR – NIGHT

 

German soldier two is talking to GERMAN SOLDER THREE over drinks.

 

                                                            GERMAN SOLDER TWO

                                    No one will believe me. There are messages in

                                    those broadcasts.

 

                                                            GERMAN SOLDIER THREE

                                    Secret messages? Coming from the British?

                                    To whom? Just because you’ve heard some curious

                                    statements from the locals, you think the invasion

                                    is coming soon?

 

                                                            GERMAN SOLDIER TWO

                                    Yes.

 

                                                            GERMAN SOLDIER

                                    Why don’t you have another drink? Then get

                                    some sleep. There is nothing going on here

                                    except maybe your wild imagination.

 

German soldier two finishes his drink and crosses his arms in disgust.

 

MONTAGE:

-          Valentine meeting with a GROUP OF MALE RESISTANCE FIGHTERS in a barn.

-          Older woman marking up a map with GROUP OF FEMALE RESISTANCE FIGHTERS in a hosiery shop.

-          Miriam listens to the radio via a headset in the wine cellar.

-          Jean listens out his window as vehicles move in the opposite direction from which they came earlier in the day.

-          Father Michel talking to British Soldiers.

-          Tracks on a rail bridge being broken by RESISTANCE FIGHTERS.

-          Communication lines being cut by RESISTANCE FIGHTERS.

                                                                                          

EXT. STREET IN FRONT OF BICYCLE SHOP – DAY

                                   

                                                            BBC RADIO – MALE VOICE (V.O.)

In the early morning hours of this morning, it was

announced that from Supreme Headquarters, Allied

Expeditionary Force, that Allied troops have captured

Bayeux, and have crossed the road connecting Bayeux

with Caen at several points. Beyeux is the first French

town whose capture has been announced. It stands

about five miles inland from the Channel coast, on the

main road and railway running west from Caen towards

the Cherbourg Peninsula. It’s an ancient town with a

peace-time population of about seven thousand; famous

for its early Gothic Cathedral and for the Bayeux Tapestry,

which used to be kept in the olds Bishop’s Palace….

It was reported by a correspondent that French folk sang

and cheered as British armor passed through their village,

and somehow, within the hour or two, every  French boy

had a British badge on his beret and every girl a badge

on her blouse.             

 

EXT. COBBLESTONE STREET – BAYEUX – DAY

 

As the Allied Troops roll into town, the citizens celebrate in the streets, singing and welcoming them. Valentine and Miriam stand outside of the bicycle shop, their arms around each other. A YOUNG BOY (11) runs up to them.

 

                                                            YOUNG BOY

                                    Excuse me, are you Valentine?

 

                                                            VALENTINE

                                    It depends, who is asking, young man?

 

                                                            YOUNG BOY

                                    Jean. He sent me to collect his wine.

 

BLACK SCREEN

SUPER: “In June of 1944, members of the several French Resistance units in the town of Bayeux were guided by daily secret BBC news messages in their hidden radios. This along with numerous Resistance members being vigilant of their surroundings brought word of the Allied Invasion they had all been waiting for.”

“Resistance members such as French cyclist Guillame Mercader, blind music teacher Jacques Lusseyran, Germaine Limeul and Julia Picot the “Doves in the Tower” providing and sharing valuable information gathered, Father Dom Aubourg, who had told the nearby British soldier of the Germans leaving Bayeux en masse on June 6-7, subsequently sparing the town from British bombing, were the ordinary members of French life who extraordinarily helped the Allies and spared Bayeux from harm.”

“While their paths did not all cross in the real timeline, their stories exemplify the hundreds of French Resistance Fighters of World War 2.”

 

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